Sound Feedback

 Feedback From Mr Halsey

Great opening shot - and it works perfectly with the music. The aerial element I think is particularly effective and well selected.

Immediately obvious flip to contrapuntal - always a good sign that the task is done effectively. Again, great choice and variety of clips.

Technical issues on the parallel bit - very 'jerky' pictures of the GoPro/surfing... lost a bit of the parallel element as a result of this.


Feedback From Students

• Parallel was very fitting. Contrapuntal was unclear at times but mostly understood. The parallel was mostly unclear at the beginning with the car.

• Clear change - sound went very well with first videos

• Good choice of parallel music as it fits the scene well. Maybe make the first scene easier to tell whether it was contrapuntal or parallel.

• Very good choice of parallel music and clips as they go very well together. If the music had been synced a little bit better to the video, as the transition took a bit longer to understand.

• Editing was really good and the music was in time with videos. There was a clear difference between the parallel and contrapuntal sound.

• Loved the range of videos used. The opening shot matched. Editing was good.

• Parallel sound worked extremely well also the music worked extremely well with the timing of surfing scene. Clear indication between different sounds. Southpaw scene is maybe parallel although the upbeat music is contrapuntal with the other films. Obviously, the smooth scene would be nice with the surfing video, but technical issues.

• The music fit with the first clip really good and the clip of the two guys fighting with the calming music was very contrapuntal. The first clip was smooth.

• Good use of parallel and contrapuntal sound. For fight scenes, the contrapuntal music wasn't as dramatic as it could have been.

• The videos were in sync with the music.

• The choice of sound went well with the images and videos. The scenes could have been more explicit for the contrapuntal.

• It was easy to recognise which bit was parallel and contrapuntal.

• The timing of the videos worked well with the timing of the music.

• Parallel sound was really obvious and clear to identify. Contrapuntal was included very well, good music choice. Include more contrapuntal examples - make them more distinct.